Act 4, Scene 1
Iago: my lord, cassio is coming... go hide
*cassio enters*
Cassio: hello honest Iago
Iago: good evening cassio
Cassio: How was your night?
Iago: It was good and how about you?
Cassio: It was a really long night honest Iago i think i made a mistake.
Iago: whatttt?! What do you mean??!
Cassio: I think I was with Desdemona last night.
Iago: TELL ME MORE!
Cassio: We will talk later. Desdemona ask to see me...
* Cassio leaves *
*Othello comes out*
Othello: That whore thought i wouldn’t find out.
Iago: NO NO NO you don’t know what happened.
Othello: Did he tell you anything?
Iago: Well he told me that we are going to talk later.
Othello: GO FIND HIM and talk to him!
*Everyone leaves*
Scene 2
*knock at the door*
Desdemona: Cassio is that you?!
Cassio: Yes my lady, please let me in.
Desdemona: *Aside* I’m speechless how could this happen no no my true love is for Othello not Cassio. I will be ashamed opon if Othello find out. How can I tell Othello that I am having
Cassio’s child. I must tell Cassio the news.
* Desdemona opens the door for Cassio*
Cassio: What’s wrong my lady?
Desdemona: I have news to tell you. I don’t know how I feel about it.
Cassio: go ahead and tell me my lady.
*Cassio kisses Desdemona hand*
Desdemona: I’m pregnant but not with Othello
Cassio: Than who is the father of this child?
Desdemona: It is you Cassio....
Cassio: Wait what?!
*Desdemona starts crying*
Cassio: My lady why are you crying?
Desdemona: What are we going to tell Othello?
Cassio: NO NO my sweet Desdemona i can not tell Othello and risk trying to get my job back.
Desdemona: SO you leaves this to me?! I have to break this NEWS to othello?!!
Cassio: YES!
Desdemona: I wish you well. Goodbye Cassio.
*Cassio leaves*
Scene 3
*Desdemona calls for Emilia *
Desdemona: Emilia i need you to go find Othello and tell him i need to talk to him.
Emilia: what for?
Desdemona: Doesn’t matter. Do what i ask! NOW!!
*Emilia brings in Othello*
Othello: My sweet Desdemona what’s the matter? Are you sick? Are you hurt?
Desdemona: *Aside* Othello could never find out about this baby, if he does it will ruin me and Cassio.I must kill Othello I will poison him. Ahh yes that is what I will do.
Desdemona: No No I am fine. I just needed to see you my love.
Othello: I don’t have time for this you whore.
*Desdemona hands a cup of wine to Othello*
Desdemona: WHAT! How could You accuse me of such things.
Othello: I..I..I don’t feel so well I need to go lay down.
Desdemona: Take back what you said pray for forgiveness before it’s too late my sweet Othello.
Othello: What did you do to me?!
Desdemona: You will be dead in no time. I am sorry Othello I have to protect my unborn child and Cassio.
*Othello coughs blood*
Desdemona: Goodbye my lord.
*Othello dies*
Desdemona: HELP HELP!!!
*Emilia enters*
Emilia: What happen mistress?
Desdemona: Something has happened with Othello. A tragedy!
*Desdemona starts to have a break down*
Emilia: Oh goodness my lady please don’t cry.
Desdemona: He was drinking his wine and then he just got really weak and fell on the floor.
Now he is dead.
Emilia: It’s okay my lady, everything is going to be okay.
Desdemona: *Aside* Yes it will be okay, everything is going to be just fine.
*lights dim and scene fades away*
Scene 4
*9 months later*
*Desdemona gives birth and its a boy*
Emilia: Oh my mistress Desdemona this baby does not look like othello’s son.
Desdemona: Emilia i have something to tell you...
Emilia: what it is mistress?
Desdemona: This is not othello’s son.
*Desdemona dies*
Emilia: wait NO!!! TELL ME WHO IS THE FATHER?!?!
*Emilia takes the baby and acts like its her own son*
Scene 5
*7 years later*
*Cassio walks in*
Emilia: Hello Cassio. What brings you here?
Cassio: I just wanted to see if everything is fine..
Emilia: *aside i think Cassio is the dad of this kid*
Emilia: Everything is fine. Thank you for asking.
Cassio: I never knew you had a kid. Never thought you would get pregnant and please don’t tell me thats my kid.
Emilia: Well i don’t know who the father is.
Cassio: what do you mean? That kid isn’t yours?
Emilia: You know how Desdemona died? Well this kid is hers and not mine. She told me the kid wasn’t Othello's.
Cassio: *aside I think that’s my kid.*
Cassio: I need to leave. Talk to you later Emilia.
*Cassio leaves*
*Francis and Cassio enters*
Cassio: Hello young boy. You look so much like your mother.
Francis: oh yes my mother Emilia.
Cassio: Oh no no no.. I need to tell you something.
Francis: Oh what is it?
Cassio: Emilia is not your mother, a beautiful woman named Desdemona is your mother.
Francis: Where is this Desdemona?
Cassio: She died seven years ago giving birth to you.
Francis: Who is my father?
Cassio: Well.... I am your father.
Francis: So for the seven years that I needed a father figure in my life you have failed to be
there for me at all?
Cassio: I am very sorry that I have let you down.
Francis: It is okay. The one thing you have taught me is to not be like you.
Cassio:But Francis----
Francis: Goodbye Cassio.
Cassio:If that’s what you want Francis.
*Francis Exits*
*Cassio dies because he is so heart broken*
THE END
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ReplyDeletethe story was overall good but needs more detail
DeleteA.S
Very good story, but it needs some capitalization.
ReplyDeletethe capalization is very odd you could have put more action like shouts or pronounces
ReplyDeletecori p.
The play is very good and all it needs some capitalization. -A.T
ReplyDeleteThis is actually an interesting twist i love Desdemona taking control of the story in a way
ReplyDeletehowever some of the dialogue was a bit choppy other then that tho it's pretty cool
H.J.S
the baby thing wsint in the book that,s a nice change of pace noah.f
ReplyDeletethe story has some really good detail but i feel like is missing a little bit more also more capitalization. Franky
ReplyDeleteI like the plot twist when Desdemona kills Othello. While it was very tense and had you on the edge of the seat, it calmed down around the end. I also liked the time skip but there were some capitalization errors and it needs more pronunciations.
ReplyDeleteA.L.
I like the story but I don't think that Desdemona would have ever cheated on Othello because she loved him. -JB
ReplyDeleteI like how Desdemona actually has Cassio's kid, but there needs to be more information about the story and not just skip through important parts. -SS
ReplyDeletethe play was very good! detail is great. i really liked it because there's a character in the play name francis and thats my nickname ;) Franky
ReplyDeleteI Like thestory it is different from the others but ithink it needed more detail.
ReplyDeletedoesnt really line up with the actual story but cool concept nonetheless -lr
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